David Hart: Work, the work
(Flarestack Publishing, 41 Buckley's Green, Alvechurch, Birmingham B48 7NG; chapbook, 2005, 16pp, isbn 1900397838. £5.)

If you're not in the habit of reading chapbooks, this one is worth making an exception for. In Work, the work, David Hart has created a coherent snapshot of Beethoven's inner turmoil at the time of composing his final piano sonata, No. 32, op 111. The poem has grown from the music and operates as its emotional, verbal paradigm or equivalence.

The title functions on, at least, three levels: that of placing the works side by side, following the notion of work (the sonata) and work (the poem); that of the composer's affirmation against despair, i.e. that which gives meaning; and, though weakened by the comma, in a parallel sense of working with the work (the sonata), which is, indeed, what gives the poem its final form.

Although music shapes the form, the style is that of a self-absorbed journal or the consciousness stream flowing through the composer's mind during performance or, as is may be suggested by the opening, the jumbled thoughts of a man freshly awake but prior to arising from bed. Is this Hart's attempt to suggest what would replace sound in the deaf composer's mind? Interesting thesis, though this is not a poem about musical ideas, technique or innovation but about a man's inner struggle with the imbalance of what he perceives as his destiny. The language often duplicates the emotional incoherence that can be discovered at the end of the Heiligenstadt Testament (the letter to his brother in which Beethoven affirmed his art as a buffer against death and suicide and in which he resolved to struggle on against what he regarded as a cruel Fate) and he is often depicted as having the emotional stability of an adolescent; maturity is in the music.

The poem begins:

IF I could fall out of bed –
If I could fall –
If I could contrive a fall–
If I could fall out, crawl to the table, out the pen to work

A muddling of cadence and reality, a sick man summoning the will power to arise and work, or the composer meditating merciful release in a ‘dying fall'? Repetition of the 'I' underlines the self-focussing nature of what we are about to experience, but the word 'fall', repeated an equal number of times, recalls to mind something quite different – a Lucifer in defiance of the "Unconditional Designer" who "knows my graft and turns away"; a Prometheus who filches his creative fire from above and returns with it to earth:

Can a man raid heaven,

raid Heaven and bring back notes
meant for word-graft-song from the beginning?

 

The 'fall' out of bed and the 'fall' into work can't be ignored. From the outset we're aware of a man both blessed and cursed with a 'heavenly' gift with its 'hellish' consequences, emotionally and physically.

Beethoven is presented as an accident and victim of a Fate which, latterly, imprisoned him in "The Voice Out Of Silence", and which we are made aware of from the beginning:

            My brother
who had no brothers lived six days,
did not know me, was not me, might have been me, was not

to be taught by Rovanti, Koch, Pfeifer and Neefe,
to hear the work of Hiller, Benda, Grétry and Paisello,
did not live to know his own name, my name.

The ironic consequences are not lost amid the stream – if Beethoven's brother had survived he would not have been him, but then neither would Beethoven have been an identical self. References to the dead brother invite us to go beyond a comparison of self with other and invite us to weigh this individual life against nothingness, non-being. We can construct what it might mean to have had a Beethoven exist, but what might it mean if he hadn't?

The poem holds up for us the idea of an individual who is blemished, inadequate, brilliant. He is the joke and scourge of maids:

I attempted my best

maid-politic behaviour and endeavoured to keep her,
hoping she would cook well and not shit-snigger me.
She saw me washing naked almost and she smirked.

He is the pathetic human being who seeks his soul mate and fails:

Instead of a kiss

released me with her lace and tippet smile and half a crate
of Riesling. If in this fleshy world
she would have
     leaned into me the way I have seen women do,
what revelation then in my dissonance! What apprenticeship!
I position myself eyes closed as if she is
               leaning into me, a touch
of a lean of a tilt
                    I am the plaything
of the One Who Gives And Who Takes Away to whom I am
of necessity obedient wholly in debt.

He is the dishevelled tramp, socially uncouth, a figure of broader social ridicule, "mocked everyday by puppets who think they know better", but he is also the composer:

     I have sweated
     in pain my own
          desire
               for holiness
     with intent
   on fire-wings
discovered
     echo
               from my heart –

Hart's admiration for the sonata never temps him to dabble in übermensch or Romantic hero myths. Suffering in the poem is painful, embarrassing; creativity is envisaged as a revised and re-revised ground out act of human will – which might suggest to us yet another possible interpretation of the poem's title. But out of the cadence and cohesion of the poem, formed from the criss-cross of its subject's random thoughts, emerges a figure who overcomes adversity to achieve, but is as unable as any to understand the reasons for his success. Which takes us full circle to piano sonata, No 32 op 111 to look for another sort of explanation and beginning.


copyright © John Couth, 2005. All quotations are copyright © David Hart.