Heaventree New
Poets, Volumes 3 & 4
(Heaventree
Press, Coventry, pamphlets, pp. 40 (vol. 3) & 39 (vol. 4), £3
each, isbn (vol. 3), 0-9548811-7-6; isbn (vol. 4) 0-9548811-8-4)
It's good to see a small press doing one of the things small presses
do best: introducing young and little-known writers and giving them the
space to showcase a wider selection of their work than would be possible
in most magazines. The Heaventree New Poets series publishes 3 or 4 contrasting
poets per pamphlet and, by allowing each about 10-15 pages, provides
a clear enough idea of each poet's work to know whether you'd
like to see more of it.
Volume 3 contains poems and prose by Ziqian Chan, Victoria, Heath,
Leila Rasheed and Michael Rose-Steel. Ziqian Chan's work is represented
by long, quasi-narrative, 'prose-poems' that for me tip a
little bit too far towards experimental fiction to sit comfortably
within the genre. There's more than a touch of Barthelme and Borges
here. But this ain't really the moment to reignite that debate.
Whatever else, these pieces are certainly examples of well-observed and
accomplished writing. The style is laconic and witty; the subject matter
touching and absurd:
Amid the laughter that surrounded the opening of the museum, one thing
was overlooked. The original plan had included a wax figure of ______,
the finishing touch to this historical re-creation, allowing visitors
to walk into the museum as if into his life during those three years
on the island. Yet it has never been sighted. Photographs on websites
and in newspapers are proof of this, as only dust and air occupy the
chairs. Faces have appeared in the room but none belong to the man in
question.
This is the opening paragraph of 'The Five Myths of ______',
itself apparently an excerpt from a longer piece called 'The Museum
of ______'. It's more-ish stuff so I hope we'll
see more from him in the future.
The best of Victoria Heath's poetry displays a fascination with
language, its character(s) and mechanisms. Here's an excerpt from
'a e i o u':
violet
'i' takes Harper's
BAZAAR to lunch.
violent
time.
'i' sparkles in drift
and on the purple stump of blight:
sharp. spiked
like tin-tipped thought
it flowers in the grass
To my mind this is some of the best writing in either pamphlet, and
Victoria Heath continues her engagement with the nuts and bolts of language
in 'cut' and 'ace paint', both of which are compact
and playful technical displays, but not without heart too.
Leila Smith is a more conventional sort, employing both rhyme and meter
in poems that draw heavily on mythology. I'm less attracted to
her work than that of some writers in the series, but it's a matter
of personal taste: her craft is pretty much beyond reproach. She writes
clearly and intelligently, she handles her self-imposed forms well, and
there are nice touches of homely surrealism:
Who
says they have not seen the wind?
Its telephone
is ringing in the wood.
The cyclone
of an olive trunk
has knotted
up Penelope's split ends.
(from 'Dryads')
The final poet in volume three is Michael Rose-Steel. His work covers
a broad range of subject matter and, accordingly, style. The more conventional
lyric poems are capitalised and punctuated, full of well-observed images,
and display an admirable fluidity. The rhythms never jar, even perhaps
when they ought to. Sometimes I felt a startling idea could be better
highlighted by a jerk or a rhythmic stop: it's too easy to get
caught up in the music and bypass points of interest, which is sort of
a compliment I guess. I think his work is much more exciting when he
abandons easy-going meters and punctuation and lets the reader come to
him, filling in any gaps him-or-herself. The poem that rounds off this
anthology, 'to explain', is perhaps his most (and very) successful.
This is the opening:
what
we see is empty
this sculpture
is unending
speaker
to speaker never
a
shape a
path we
follow
marbling
words presenting not
escaping
the last blank voice
Volume four kicks off with Patrick Gilmore. He has a quirky imagination,
occasionally straying into kitsch (that's no bad thing: there's
a neon statuette of the Blessed Virgin on my desk right now), as in 'American
Cowgirl', which involves 'standing by your man' and 'a
hoedown/ when everyone left in twos'. 'The Invention of the
Parachute' is a beautifully whimsical bit of writing and I hope
Mr Gilmore doesn't mind me quoting it in full:
One
day Lenormand showed his design
with two
parasols: as he leapt from a tree
two
girls, sunstruck, looked on. One asked
if one might
snag on a sprig
as,
steering from his beech lair,
he felt
air pucker and pummel
into
his intricate canopies.
He held
them so closely, their flounces lapped
then
slowed as he fell, so he could watch
not the
sisters – with dresses like sheets –
but
beyond, perhaps: cow and calf,
a meadow
nearing, a butterfly's teeter
under
the air-plump silk. So the parasols
that once
had formed a floating raft
were
given back to each girl, as if a secret
might be
better kept, by being halved.
I think aerial-pastoral may even constitute a new genre.
Gregory Leadbetter writes the kind of poems that win prizes. They're
elegant, the line-breaks are beautifully placed and timed, and most end
with a well-executed cadential pay-off. He also, and admirably, manages
to avoid cliché when writing about the everyday and the natural
world. I'm sure we'll be hearing from him again. This is
the last stanza of 'Who put Bella In The Witch Elm':
Fire
had so hollowed the trunk
that its
weight vaulted the empty
space where
she was hatched,
where I
found wildflowers laid
in a guesswork
bouquet of runes.
A selection of poems from Jonathan Morley wraps up volume four. His
work ranges from the delightfully and deliberately graceless to the coolly
satisfying, taking in some streetwise dialect along the way. My favourite
of his here is 'Spon', a poem largely about fog, which demonstrates
both his ability to pile sharply focused images and his knack of undercutting
them with sudden moments of tender bathos. Here's a chunk of it:
lamplight
swings into triangles and cones,
trees knuckle
at churches, grass glares white,
and like
earth huddled in a cold amnion
a water-skin
films privet, hornbeam, herb
and our
hair.
I don't know about you, but I think that's rather lovely.
I've not seen the earlier two volumes in this series, but on the
basis of the poetry in 3 and 4, I'd certainly like to. It's
a pretty eclectic mix, and it's good to see a publisher taking
a punt on interesting new and young writers. I think I should probably
buy them all just to show support: I know the best things in the
world (such as review copies) are free, but occasionally I get a twinge
of guilt. It must be my Catholic upbringing. I have to go now. Mary needs
her batteries changing.
Copyright © Nathan Thompson, 2007.
All quotations are copyright © by the authors, 2006.