I
Under
the thick sheet of water
ribbed, rushing
an eye of air
A scattering
of thin silver cigarette foils
on the black ash, like paper to the touch now they've been burned.
On the heap of rice-straw mats; then the flood from the typhoon
took them.
Dislodged from her room with the carpet and the loose dust under
it
and the padlocks.
How the
bamboos sweep their heads down over the path
in honour of the passing.
thin sticks
in soft skin
mossed
up, and unsheathed;
bark hanging from the wet wood
In this
dark bowl of the woods
where nothing changes
the sky silvered
with a stirring of the fronds against the light.
What was
intended to be a root, of a tree,
and now the moss grows from it,
hanging in air.
And the other root, like a beard
with water-drops hanging from it
from the stream.
The road
snakes round the hill
and hugs it
the bamboos fall off the mountainside
flopping in curls.
In the
dark valley no movement.
Motif:
the monotone
(steppes: Mali wastes)
where the plough turns
under the digue;
comes, and returns
unendingly.
Gleam,
glisten, glide under the rock
where the old beard of fine roots drips;
pulse of a tiny wave over the moss
and now
the bamboo-leaves will tremble
from the melting on them.
Little
wormlets
at all angles over the bark
but not random;
flecks, nail-marks
on a silky dull green
in patterns.
Strange
regularities
in the burrowings of the creatures
in the soft mud under the water
where I drink my drink for my
dead wife and wash my face.
Shaggy
boiled crud, for bark
rhythms of ridge
open up,
ridges become cleft,
and re-fold
Silent
wood
the woodpecker quietly
off,
and the crow echoing.
II
Light
let in on the
wreckage of last year's snows
Green,
mottled, rotting.
A little
stand of mushrooms
along the groin of a meadow
under bamboos;
two streams
of mist
so slowly, quietly rising
from behind the mountain.
Brown
lip
where the bloodied scar of the trunk
drools, scarf 'd
and welded.
The Jardin
du Luxembourg,
driving back on black coffee from Arles;
what rage, what hate, what misery.
A trickle
sound in the forest
and the leaf falls
Watching
the light grow
crook'd in the arm of this tree
while the crows all around
Aw, Aw,
III
Leaves,
shadow-lapping
rust and
thick yellow, with green
her clothes
(her sweep?)
her colours
translucent
brush-strokes, for ribs
like an insect-pod Christ by Cimabue
but with more sense of what are muscles.
A crow
straggles its way across the void
to meet them,
the fiery flood
across these uncompanionable peaks
where
the bamboos
grind against each other
for the coming winter.
burning
firewood, for baths
smouldering rice-hulls, for ash
the tobi
circles around and doesn't find much,
the mice having gone to ground;
so that one is grateful for the red berries that stand out
and the thin peppers that glow
and orange fires under plumes,
and for any sunset without clouds
that slows down the waning of the light a little longer.
The wild boar (or tanuki?) now shit gingkos
with the nuts mostly intact
and a mush of digested flesh round them;
the old crow still hangs by the jaw
slicked down by the rain, over the weeks,
in the silence.
The hill
of rice-husks
has a bunch of old bamboo stakes stuck in from the top
to let the air in as it burns.
The sharp odour.
Fierce
orange-red
under couch-grass:
her colour,
my smell.
Small paddyfields
with rounded yellow-green grass banks bounding them in.
Coming
down in sunlight through a broken glade
thinking of my wife as she then was
"Good
morning Mr Sheeps";
"Whoops!" for the tail of a rabbit, vanishing
Tensing
and Silo in the snow;
in the Portobello Road, 6 a.m., baring her bum to a fire-hydrant.
The tea-bushes
by our field: "We should do everything" (that
pertains to
living in the
countryside in
Japan)
But
Samson and
Delilah
ran
away
The ink
puckers the
paper
at
the knots
where the
brush turned,
pulling
the strength
in.
shoes,
detective stories,
matchboxes, her
major remains
washed
away as
ash when
the river
rose
So
that at
last she
put her
all into
it
(tout
pour l'art)
the
glass
rib
wavers
back
and
forth,
plays
over
the
lichen,
the
colour
of
dead
blood,
under
the
unending
rush,
which
holds
to
the
rock,
too
thin
to
be
shifted.
Abandoned
(when
she
went
to
London)
but
not
let
go.
IV
The
pale
cream
of
the
circle
of
the
lower
sun
through
the
drifting
grey,
cloud
off
the
mountain;
the
streamer
bunches
up
round
the
flaming
wheel,
wreathes
it
in
shroud,
hides
it
again.
The
snow,
a
stole
hanging
off
the
branch
of
this
tree.
There
is
the
lichen
that
lives
under
the
stream,
at
full
torrent.
Flat
to
the
rock,
a
dark
dried-blood
colour.
The
long
pocket
of
air,
in
the
lee
of
a
rock,
that
flips
on
and
off
irregularly.
Strange
convergence
this
pattern,
these
flecks
on
this
hard
wood,
like
limbs
to
the
palm
that
has
the
bark
like
loose
socks
gunaikos,
of
woman,
rucked
up
gaunt
bark,
many-holed
round
a
vacancy.
Little
scutterings
of
snow,
trundling
down
the
slope
ahead,
diminishing.
The
thick
sough
of
the
wind.
The
soughing
of
a
thousand
trees,
range
to
range,
as
the
darkness
closes.
V
but
lo,
the
bracken
sprouts
& curls
cet immense pouvoir
qui se déferle
with the bronze-bright shaggy pelt
waiting to unfurl
spray of broken-down ferns
splayed from the centre
studded with them.
Colonies
of pale and paler lichens
that meet like clouds or sea-wrack
and the bark already cracked
souls
fade,
or there would be an encumbering in the world?
far-off surf in the pinetops
thick naked light on the scarred trunks
Leaf ironed
out to a fullness,
old bamboo hard like ivory
a fullness;
a stillness; present;
not etched but there.
Always
with their tops chawed off
tips chawed off
the great phalloi
bamboo thrusting out of the ground
the green
not vivid but virulent
the flat mirror of water with the border of mud
with ragged banks
so flat, so delicate
waiting to be disturbed
with feet and with plantings.
And under the roughened, fast-moving
water
the shadow of a frond, waving.
"I need
help!"
huelp
Heavy
surf, not far:
the storm working itself up in the treetops.
On the mountain, the cedars thrash,
the ribbed water rushing.
never
bent
she knew she was a nuisance
never gave myself up to her
till 2-3 days before she died.
The halberds
on the bronzes like these leaves;
the silvery-green fly-like creatures
flit about them intently.
VI
'You are very calm about all this'
horrent
et tremunt
and into the drowning-boats
and out
of the dark cabin, the voice of a radio
and the two lights of slightly diff erent tones
the white and the slightly yellow
tussocks
under snow.
Tired
and glazed and as if pulled square by the plastic surgery
gazing at me
flatly, making no argument.
Betrayed and hiding nothing.
Keeping
my options open:
ne manquez pas l'épisode où vous gagnez
(coming
down from the Sacré-Coeur past the closed-in bar)
Piles
of boxes of neatly packed
cigarette packs, and maybe one of them will have the Key.
Under
the thick sheet of water
ribbed, rushing
an eye of air.
A scattering
of thin silver cigarette foils
on the black ash, like paper to the touch now they've been burned.
On the heap of rice-straw mats; then the flood from the typhoon
took
them.
The first
answer
was always 'No'.
In
the stillness
the
watersound cut
off by
the pass
the
wraiths move
on the
mountain
the
tiny waterpattering
and
the owl
behind me.
A
very remote
light there
down by
the roadside
a
bit like
a firefly
the
mountain
blocked
off
by
the mist
and
then
again
the
dog-barks.
Motif:
the
monotone,
with
a
little
relief
and
texturing,
senza
struttura
architettura
gotta
get
above
the
field-line
to
drink
water
without
poison
to
where
the
snow
lies
yet
unmelted
Skeletons
of
old
eyes
cracking
where
they
should
have
moved
O
ye
whom
I
pass
by
when
I
pass
by
the
Yodogawa
Christian
Hospital
will
you
be
satisfied?
with
your
monument,
when
I
have
made
it
quod
non
imber
edax
Afraid;
dried;
paralysed;
denied
her
thrice.
Steadily
over
the
years
in
small émiettements,
witherings
and
closings:
"When
I have got this done,
then we will have castles in Spain."
con smaldi,
with tiles, with green and blue
and the dark spaces in the garden
where
you will be
Bluffly
accepting her, denying her. Denied her thrice.
Videt
peccator et tabescet
I, PJMakin, under the ribbed water, by the Ark, with head down
floating south
Eat some
raisins,
couple the synapses,
gender more words.
VII
Fight back silly tears, all is not lost
that is lost, and
you will never be young again.
"Why did you take my bright cloak?
I will
never get back to heaven-road now; wander
this keck-end of world
lonely for brightness;
give me
back my bright cloak?"
Flitting
souls
wander in this waste,
not knowing what they have done,
that it was their chance;
that they
blurred it, mucked it around
like a cat with a shrew, or a flower
kicked to death by passers-by;
and wonder why Dante was Dante.
You,
will have to wait
in the land of nothing
while your sister eats.
Peter
Makin grew up in Lincolnshire and Mali, and was educated in London
(under Eric Mottram) and Paris. For the last 25 years he has lived
in Japan,
where he teaches literature and writes (Pound's Cantos: Johns Hopkins U.P.; Bunting:
The Shaping of his Verse: OUP; [ed.] Basil Bunting on Poetry: Johns Hopkins U.P.).